My name is
Pablo, I was born in Santiago, Chile. I’m 21 years old.
I went to
daycare when I was two years old, and when I was four years old, I started my
primary education in 1998 at Alcantara School, education institution where I
studied until 2007. In 2008, I started at Notre Dame School my high school
education. In 2012, I entered to Universidad Alberto Hurtado and studied BA in
humanities. In 2014, finished this first career, I decided to study Information
Management, which I’m studying at present.
In familiar
ambits, I’m the last son of four children and I was born twelve years after the
third one. In 2000 my father left my
house, but I’m still keeping a fantastic relationship with him. At this moment,
I live with my mom and two of my siblings. In 2009, I knew than my father had
had a son out of marriage two years older than me, Andrés. Actually, Andrés is
one of my best friends and was completely accepted by my family like a brother,
even my mom loves him.
About my
likes, I like very much to play football and to play guitar, to be with my
friends and to sleep, to eat and to visit my brothers.
Hi my dear friend!!! My first suggestion is to delete the phrase "years old" in your first sentence because it sounds redundant. So it would be like this "I went to daycare when I was two years old, and when I was four, I started..."
ReplyDeleteAlso, you wrote "education institution", and I think you referred to "educational institution". In that sentence, I would delete the the comma because it is a very long sentence, and in English sentences are usually shorter. So it would be like this "I went to daycare when I was two years old, and I when I was four, I started my primary education in 1998 at Alcantara School. Here I studied until 2007"
That's all so far...I hope tou don't feel destroyed xD
Hi Pablo, well done! And you also have quite an impressive family life. Wow. Modern families are like that, aren´t they?
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